高一英语作文模拟题:文明的举止

作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升，学术词汇使用过少；可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；请注意分段。

Today,country's economy is developing and communicate more and more frequently,so it is very necessary that we should make our behavior more gentlemanly. I found that many people have bad behavior in China.For example,in China,many people spit on the ground and many people go for a walk with their dog who bark when others sleeping.In my opinion,we should learn from foreign.