单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。
My Dream Everyone has a dream. A dream can lead the way to success and happiness. I want to be a teacher in the future. My father and my mother are teachers, too. Thanks to my teacher, I can improve myself and enjoy a better life. I think that teachers are great. They can change someone's life and make he or she succeed. I want to help students with their studies. I want to be a great man.