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七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文:有趣的一天

发布时间:2013-06-19 16:11浏览次数:17682
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Sam昨天六点钟起床。然后骑自行车去公园,他在公园玩得很开心。中午和父母在麦当劳(McDonald’s)吃午饭。下午Sam和他的同学在学校打篮球,从下午四点一直打到(till)下午六点。晚饭后,Sam和父亲一起散步(go for a walk),父亲给他买了一张古典音乐CD。这一天Sam过得多么有趣啊!
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可适当增加从句的使用;词汇表达较灵活准确,高级词汇使用过少,另外注意文中个别的拼写错误;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。

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I have a friend called Sam.He told me that he had an interesting day. Yesterday,Sam got up at 6:00 and rode a bike to the park.He had such a great time there.After that,he went to the McDonald’s tohave lunch with his parents.The food there was very delicious and the waiters was really gentle.And that was it,Sam rode to the school to play basketball withhis classmates.He arrived there at 4:00.They played basketball till to 6:00.But Sam didn't feel tired.He thought it was so much fun.After dinner,his father went for a walk with Sam and Sam got a lovely surprise------his father bought an old music CD for him.Sam was so exciting that he couldn't speak any more. Sam and I both think it's an interesting day.What about you?

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