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Everyone has their own favorite sport, so do I. My favorite sport is playing football. I felt in love with football by chance. One day I met a football on my way home. I was curious about the little round ball. Then, I played it with my friends. From then on, football became a part of my life. We always trained ourselves and sometimes made a competition with each other to improve our football skills. Among the millions of stars, I love Beckham most. It is not only for his handsome appearance, but also for his perfect skills. My most dream is to become a professional football player.