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Stephen Curry, a popular player in NBA, whose fans will be curious about what kind of sneakers he likes. His favorite is Under Armour! Now I am going to tell you why Curry has a special taste for it? Being well-known as a high-end functional sportswear brand, with a "making the sportswear stronger”, Under Armour adheres to design the products with passion and innovation, providing the activists with the full range of sports equipment, including clothing, shoes and accessories. There are three big series of products in Under Armour, such as Foot Gear, Cold Gear, Heat Gear. Among them, Heat Gear and Cold Gear is designed with a kind of revolutionary fabric that specifically for all kinds of climate, which can help the athletes be an optimal statute even in a harsh environment. While Foot Gear has done a mass of technological innovation especially the elastic chassis technology and the air cushion technology. Put in another way, Heat Gear and Cold Gear means to protect our products from cold and heat. In addition, it also has All Season Gear, Loose Gear, and so on. Next I am going to show you the advantages of Under Armour. Firstly, with the high-qualified craft, this brand mainly focuses on the professional line. Comparing with Nike, it is only slightly more expensive. Secondly, Its Brand slogan is "Cotton is our enemies." All its products are made of nylon, polyester and its design style is extremely concise. Originated from college football, thus it gets a high popularity among young people. Recently It gives the priority to the color, which caters to the female’ tastes. Last but not least, each corset has its unique scientific and technological craft with the breathable, quick-drying, comfortable characteristics, contributing to reducing the frictions and helping relax the muscles No wonder Curry likes Under Armour. It deserves it!