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七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文:有趣的一天

发布时间:2013-06-19 16:11浏览次数:17695
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Sam昨天六点钟起床。然后骑自行车去公园,他在公园玩得很开心。中午和父母在麦当劳(McDonald’s)吃午饭。下午Sam和他的同学在学校打篮球,从下午四点一直打到(till)下午六点。晚饭后,Sam和父亲一起散步(go for a walk),父亲给他买了一张古典音乐CD。这一天Sam过得多么有趣啊!
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作者词汇基本功很好,高级词汇表达也比较恰当;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;全文结构较为严谨。

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Why Curry likes Under Armour Stephen Curry, a popular player in NBA, whose fans will be curious about what kind of sneakers he likes. His favorite is Under Armour! Now I am going to tell you why Curry has a special taste for it? Being well-known as a high-end functional sportswear brand, with a "making the sportswear stronger”, Under Armour adheres to design the products with passion and innovation, providing the activists with the full range of sports equipment, including clothing, shoes and accessories. There are three big series of products in Under Armour, such as Foot Gear, Cold Gear, Heat Gear. Among them, Heat Gear and Cold Gear is designed with a kind of revolutionary fabric that specifically for all kinds of climate, which can help the athletes be an optimal statute even in a harsh environment. In addition, Foot Gear has a mass of technological innovation especially the elastic chassis technology and the air cushion technology. That’s to say, Heat Gear and Cold Gear mean to protect our products from cold and heat. In addition, it also has All Season Gear, Loose Gear, and so on. Next I am going to show you the advantages of Under Armour. Firstly, with the high-qualified craft, this brand mainly focuses on the professional line. Comparing with Nike, it is only slightly more expensive. Secondly, Its Brand slogan is "Cotton is our enemy." All its products are made of nylon, polyester and its design style is extremely concise. Originated from college football, thus it gets a high popularity among young people. Recently It has given the priority to the color, which caters to the female’ tastes. Last but not least, each corset has its unique scientific and technological craft with the breathable, quick-drying, comfortable characteristics, contributing to reducing the frictions and helping relax the muscles. No wonder Curry likes Under Armour. It deserves it!

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