单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;加强长句的练习,会取得更不错的成绩;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。
My Dream What do I want to do when I'm older? Someone wants to be a doctor.Someone wants to be a basketball player because they are good at sport.Someone wants to be a writer and to make the writing.Someone wants to be a teacher because they like teaching children. I like playing the piano and I good at it.So I want to become a piano player.Play the piano is very interesting.And you can learn something of music.Piano can make you like music.A lot of musician and singer are love playing piano. I play the piano when I'm ten years old.Now I'm in grand five.I hope when I'm sixteen years old ,