单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;加强长句的练习,会取得更不错的成绩;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
My Dream What do I want to do when I'm older? Someone wants to be a doctor.Someone wants to be a basketball player because they are good at sport.Someone wants to be a writer and to make the writing.Someone wants to be a teacher because they like teaching children. I like playing the piano and I good at it.So I want to become a piano player.Play the piano is very interesting.And you can learn something of music.Piano can make you like music.A lot of musician and singer are love playing piano.