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现在你的家乡是什么季节？天气怎么样？人们在这样的天气里都干什么？根据提示写一篇介绍你们家乡天气的短文。
winter, windy and cold, wear coats and scarves, in restaurants, in the park， have a good time
加强一些长句和复杂句的使用；文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词，建议增加衔接词汇的积累；文中用词稍显贫乏，同时请注意单词拼写的检查。
It's winter here now. The weather is windy and col. Peopl ar wearin coas ad scarves. But everyone is having a good time. Friends are eatin or drinking in the restaurants. In the park, some young people are singin an dancin. Some boys are playing soccer. One man is taking some photos. How happ they are!
