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现在你的家乡是什么季节？天气怎么样？人们在这样的天气里都干什么？根据提示写一篇介绍你们家乡天气的短文。
winter, windy and cold, wear coats and scarves, in restaurants, in the park， have a good time
建议加强积累过渡词和衔接词的积累，文章结构不严谨；句式偏短，建议加强复杂句的使用；作者词汇量偏小，且拼写错误较多。
It's winter hee nw. The weather is windy and col. Peopl ar warin coas ad scarves. But everyoe is havig a ood tie. Frieds are eain or drinking in the restarants. In the park, some young people are singin an dancin. Sme boys are plaing soccer. One man is takng some photos. How happ they are!
