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七年级英语下册Unit10 单元测试试卷作文附范文:My Busy Day

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The clock back to the 1996 NFL draft, in fact in the draft before the start of the, is widely believed, which is typical of a session of the "rough draft", is not difficult to guess, this year almost can not find potential elite quarterback, each team can only tried to in other locations . Had not thought today, 18 years after looking back again in this session of the draft, with history the greatest inside linebacker of ray Lewis in the 2012 season after retire, this session of all the players are out of the stage of history, which player has left us the impression the deepest? In addition to the "Thor", it is natural to number of this session of the draft of the receivers are, can be described as their career is brilliant, dazzling. Review after 18 years, almost can not find which session draft took over can reach 96 gold generation of height, until this year, draft, Watkins, Evans levels are selected, the media, said: it is to take over the new golden generation. Most of the season, people are surprised to find that this is not only a golden generation, is more like a super platinum. As the current draft sequence of the highest receivers, Watkins talent already need not give uncecessary details, as bill only fly catcher, coach arranged enough offense revolves around him, but the question is: the second week 8 catches for 117 yards, the third week immediately became the two receptions for 19 yards, the seven or eight weeks for two weeks the ball over 120 yards, and for the next four weeks the ball over but 40 yards, his performance almost weekly are sitting on the roller coaster, is this why? Bill put Watkins as the number one receiver is not false, but to his use of a single too, only the him on the outside with the other top corner back singled out, so once Watkins met malicious role is easy to eat shriveled, in addition, the ball to get rid of the trouble really too severe. So I personally think that Watkins is a horse, but Doug Malone does not seem to be horses.

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