一年级英语作文:A Busy Day

行文流畅，但衔接词比较少；若加重从句在文中的比例，文章会很棒；文章用词太过单一，且单词拼写错误较多。

Today is saturday, is a beautiful day. My mon was clearn the table, I go to the rap to clearn table too. at the afternoon, I finsh my homework, and going to xiaoming play table tennis. in the 5 o'clock, I'm going in home, turn on the television, watch cartoons. Today is wonderful day.