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复杂句的使用不是很丰富；建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累；文章用词太过单一，且单词拼写错误较多。
Today is Saturday, a beautiful day. My mon was clearn the table, I go to the rap to clearn table too. at the afternoon, I finsh my homework, and going to xiaoming play table tennis. in the 5 o'clock, I'm going in home, turn on the television, watch cartoons. Today is wonderful day.
