句法知识不错,多多加强复杂句的练习;文中有较多拼写错误,请作者增加词汇量的积累;建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。
Today is Saturday, a fainness day. My mon at was clear the dining-table, and then I go to the rap, with mon to clear togther. at the afternoon, I finsh my homework, and going to xiaoming play table tennis. in the 5 o'clock, I'm going in home, turn on the television, watch cartoons. Today is wonderful day.