文中用词稍显贫乏,单词拼写还要加强;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。
Today is Saturday, a fainness day. My mon at was clear the dining-table, and then I go to the rap, with mon to clear together. at the afternoon, I finsh my homework, and going to xiaoming play table tennis. in the 5 o'clock, I'm going in home, turn on the television, watch cartoons. Today is wonderful day.