一年级英语作文:A Busy Day

文中用词稍显贫乏，单词拼写还要加强；句法知识不错，多多加强复杂句的练习；建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。

Today is Saturday, a fainness day. I seem my mon at was clear the dining-table, and then I go to the rap, with mon together. at the afternoon, I finsh my homework, and going to xiaoming play table tennis. in the 5 o'clock, I'm going in home, turn on the television, watch cartoons. Today is wonderful day.