单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;可适当增加从句的使用,注意文中的一些小错误;建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。
Today is Saturday, a fainness day. I seem my mon at was clear the dining-table, and then I go to the rap, with mon together. At the afternoon, I finished my homework, and going to XiaoMing play table tennis. in the 5 o'clock, I'm going in home, turn on the television, watch cartoons. Today is wonderful day.