单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;文中从句数量过少;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。
Today is Saturday, a fainness day. I seem my mon at was clear the dining-table, and then I go to the rap, with mon together. At the afternoon, I finished my homework, then go to Xiao Ming play table tennis. In the 5 o'clock, I'm going in home, turn on television, watch cartoons. Today is wonderful day.