单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用,文章会更棒;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
Today is Saturday, a fainness day. I seem my mon at was clear the dining-table, and then I go to the rap, with mon together. At the afternoon, I finished my homework, then go to Xiao Ming play table tennis. In the 5 o'clock, I'm going in home, turn on television, watch some cartoons. What a day today.