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Tom made in a rules to himself.Usually he gets uop at 6 o'clock,an hours half he goes to school.expect that ,he doesn't eat outside and listen to music on school days.He never watches TV on school nights.at the evening,He comes back by 12;00 in the moning and by 9:20 in the evening