文章上下文衔接自然;复杂句的使用不是很丰富;文中拼写错误比较多,同时请注意积累词汇量。
I have a good friend, his name is Tom. We are classsmate, at the primary school. Tom is tall, his hair is yellow, his eyes is blue, his old the me three days. We enjoy the baskeyball, but he play the well with me. I want to with he forever is a place of good bother.