文章上下文衔接自然;句式变化不明显,另外要多多加强从句在文中的比例;请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度,对拼写检查也要重视。
I have a good friend, his name is Tom. We are classmate, at the primary school. Tom is tall, his hair is yellow, his eyes color is blue, he old the me three days. We enjoy the baskeyball, but he play the well with me. I want to with him forever is a place of good brother.