句式变化不明显,另外要多多加强从句在文中的比例;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用;请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度,对拼写检查也要重视。
I have a good friend, his name is Tom. We are classmate, at the primary school. Tom is tall, his hair is yellow, and his eyes are blue. By the way, he big the me three days. We enjoy the baskeyball, but he play the well with me. I want to with him forever is a place of good brother.