若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用,文章会更棒;文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,但单词拼写做的很棒;文章上下文衔接自然。
I have a good friend, his name is Tom. We are classmate, at the primary school. Tom is tall, his hair is yellow, and his eyes are blue. By the way, his age is three days than I. We liked the basketball, but he played better than me. I want to with him forever is a place of good brother.