七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

句式变化不明显，另外要多多加强从句在文中的比例；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累；文章中拼写错误较多，同时请作者增加词汇丰富度。

Sam got up at 6 o'clock yesterday.Then went to park by bike, He had a good time at park. His familt had lunch at Mcdonald's. He played baketball with his classmate at afternoon 4 o'clock untill 6. After dinner ,Sam went for a walk with his father, Father gave him a classic music CD.what a interesting day