初一英语作文模拟题:我最喜爱的电影

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MY favourite film is "anger birds". THis film is vey amusing and interesting,the film's story is about anger birds beat the pigs that stole anger birds's eggs . And anger birds use their intelligence to grab their eggs. This film let me understand : don"t give up easily,hold on ,you will be successful.