初一英语作文模拟题:我最喜爱的电影

从句数量偏少；文中用词稍显贫乏，单词拼写方面也要加强；行文流畅，但衔接词比较少。

MY favourite film is "angry birds". THis film is vey amusing and interesting,the film's story is about anger birds fight against the pigs that stole eggs of angry birds . angry birds use their intelligence to grab their eggs. This film let me understand : don’t give up easily,hold on，you will be successful.