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Sam got up at 6:oo am last night. then he went to park by bilcycle and had a good time. In the noon, he had a lunch with his parents at McDonald's. In the afternoon, he played basketball with his classmates at school from 4:00pm to 6:00pm. After having lunch, he went for a walk with his father and his father brought a old fishioned CD for him. What a interesting day Sam had!