单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Sam got up at 6 a.m.After eating breakfast,he rode a bike to the park and he had a good time in the park.He had lunch in McDonald's with his father and mother at noon.And then,he was playing basketball with his classmates at this time yesterday at school till 6 p.m.After dinner,Sam went for a walk with his father and his father gave him a CD.How happy Sam was.