七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用，文章会更棒；文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，可是单词拼写做的不错；上下文衔接手法不熟练，没有能够有效的使用衔接词；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；可以适当增加副词的使用。

yesterday, Sam got up at six o`clock, and then he went to the park by his bike.He had a good time in the park. He had his lunch at Mcdonald`s. Then he played basketball with his classmates at school from four P.M. till six P.M.. After dinner, Sam with his fater went for a walk, his father bought a classic music CD for him. What a good Sam spent!