高一英语作文模拟题:关于汽车

作者词汇量偏少，但单词拼写做的不错；文章在句法方面做的很棒，从句和复杂句的使用不错；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；请注意分段。

At present,when economy has improved,more and more people own their cars.Some persons said,that there is no doubt that it is a good way to make people life convenience and comfort.Also,these people thoughts are it can improve other industry.Every coin has two sides,the other people think the more cars are,the more transportation problem we have.What's more,there being more and more parking problem appear,because of more and more car.