高一英语作文模拟题:关于汽车

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With the increasing of our living standard, more and more family own private cars. There are two opinions about cars. Some people support that every family should have their own car. Firstly, they think car is a transportation tool that can bring our daily life convenient and fast. Secondly, the number of the family own cars that can reflect our country's wealth, our living standard. Thirdly, car industry can bring others development. The other people hold that the opposite opinion. For one thing, cars will give out the frog can polluted our enviroment around. For another thing, the parking problem becomes more and more served. At last but not most, too many cars cause many traffic jams.