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Usage of money smartly In China tradition,saving is a goodness compared to wasting that i think is right on certain situation.sometime saving is not suitable. As a college,money maily come from family which keep us daily spending including dinner clothes etc.I think saving is adoptable for the above.why can we buy expensive clothes and food if lack of ability to earn money?a discounted clothes also are beatiful and nice quality,just because shops make promotion to attract customers.But it is not advisable to quit training as money for students.Now graduates face fierce competition in the market,according to the report,300 thousand fail to find a prompt job,knowledge and high skills are key for us to get a good job. no rule can tell you how to use the money right,just using them from long prospective to benefit your job and life.By the way,a certain work can help enrich students life.
