单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;在平时练习中应增加词汇量的积累;过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富,层次欠清晰。
My ideal is very small.I just want to and I love the people can be so light life.You can wake up every morning to see his sleep. I hope my family can live up to ninety-nine.Can and I love the people in the evening when the hand in hand for a walk.And he can hold hands with you.