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When I was in grade three, my mother taught me how to use a computer. I am typing on the computer, painting, also made a lot of good friends. My first friend is Peter, he is also the three grade, and he is very good grades, teachers and students are very fond of him. We quickly became good friends, online chat for more than 10 years. High school graduation day, Peter said he wanted to see me, I agreed, and then we go to the cafe waiting for him. Soon after, Peter came, he was very tall and thin, wearing a pair of black framed glasses, looks very handsome. We talked a lot and talked about the day we met on the Internet. That night, we were all drunk, and he had asked for my first time. So I married him, and he became my husband.