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初一英语作文模拟题:我的网友

发布时间:2013-05-16 15:01浏览次数:1426
要求:
以“我的网友 My Net Friend ”写一篇作文。
要求句子通顺,语法正确,卷面干净,书写规范。
要求不少于60个单词。
用户的作文(系统评分70.0分
评语:

可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;文中衔接词丰富。

用户练习作文:

When I was in grade three, my mother taught me how to use a computer. I am typing on the computer, painting, also made a lot of good friends. My first friend is Peter, he is also the three grade, and he is very good grades, teachers and students are very fond of him. We quickly became good friends, online chat for more than 10 years. High school graduation day, Peter said he wanted to see me, I agreed, and then we go to the cafe waiting for him. Soon after, Peter came, he was very tall and thin, wearing a pair of black framed glasses, looks very handsome. We talked a lot and talked about the day we met on the Internet. That night, we were all drunk, and he had asked for my first time. So I married him, and he became my husband.

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