作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;全文结构较为严谨;简单的使用了一些复杂句,但从句使用不充分。
Sam was get up at six yesterday,and then he was go to park by cycle,he has a great full at park.At the noon,he was eat lunch with his parents at McDonald's.In the afternoon ,Sam was play basketball from four till six with his classmates at school .After the dinner,Sam with his father went for a walk,and when they went to a music shop,his father brought a classic music CD for him.This was a great day for Sam!