七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

作者词汇表达不够多样，希望能多使用高级词汇；句式变化不明显，另外要多多加强从句在文中的比例；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构。

Sam got up at six o'clock yesterday.Then he rided bike to the park and he was so happy at there.He had a lunch with his mother in McDonald's.At this afternoon,he began to play basketball with his classmates at 4:00pm and it's over till 6:00pm.After dinner,Sam and father went for a walk,his father buy on classical music CD for him.What a funny day for Sam.