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The dragon boat festival The Dragon Boat Festival is one of the most important festival in China and takes place May 5th of lunar calender every year.This festival is originated from a great people whose name is Quyuau borned in B.C. 339. Quan yuan is a minister of Chu country eventually beated down by Qin country ,He who loved deeply his country with full heart chose to jump the river to suiside himself,people who adore his loving country spirit searched him on the boat in the river that is backgroud for dragon boat campaign,Now people compete dragon boat campaign to honour him. rice was taken into the river by people in order to fishes not eating Quyuan body.Now it evolves into a custom that peopl eat zongzi which is made of rice and other food during the dragon boat festival.In the modern time,The dragon boat festival unite families in the different city of China,for example sons and daughters come back to accopany parents.Accopany is best gift for parents. Quyuan's loving country spirit we shall learn and keep in mind every moment.We can live peacefully and happily only if our country is stronger in the world.Thanks to this peaceful time.Our China dream which realize Chinese nation rejuvenation depends on everybody shall learn and work hard to build better future for ourselves and grandchildren.
