单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;作者应在平时练习中加强复杂句的练习;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
Pen Pal Wanted I'm Lucy King, and I comes from the UK. I'm 12 years old this year. I want a pen pal from China, because I love China very much and I hope to learn more about China. I like playing sports, listening to music and seeing movies. If you are a Chinese girl and have the same hobbies as me, please write to me. I want to learn Chinese from you. May you help me? Write to me soon. Lucy King