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Tom have many rule . In he family . Tom must get up at 6 o'clock .he go to school at6:15 he doesn't eat ouside. he doesn't listen to music on school days. he Doesn’t watch TV on school nights.he Be back home by 12:00 in the morning and by 9:20 in the evening.