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Sam got up at six o'clock in the morning yersterday, then he went to the park by bike, and he had a good time in the park. At noon, he had lunch with his parents in MacDonald's. After that, he played basketball with his classmates from four p.m. till six p.m.. After the dinner, he went for a walk with his father who bought an acient CD for him. How an interesting day of Sam it was!