文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用,文章会更棒;缺少组织,上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
Sam got up at six o'clock in the morning yesterday, then he went to the park by bike, and he had a good time in the park. At noon, he had lunch with his parents in MacDonald's. After that, he played basketball with his classmates from four p.m. till six p.m.. After the dinner, he went for a walk with his father who bought an ancient CD for him. How an interesting day of Sam it was!