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单词拼写做的很棒，还请注意增加词汇的积累；正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用。
Hello, my name is Lucy King. I am 13 years old. I am from UK. My hobbies are listening to the music, watching movies and sports. I want to have a Pen pal from China. Because I am very lovely China, and I want to know more about China. So I hope to make a chinese girlfriend. Best to have the same hobby, also I hope to learn Chinese from her.
