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l’ m 13years old 。l'm an English girl。l can speak English,but like Chinese every much.Lwant to find a Chinese pen friend.Because I want to lots of chinese history .I hope we can be friend,then she can help me to study chinese and i can help she to studyEnglish Do you want to be my pen friend?