单词拼写做得很好,请注意积累词汇量;适当丰富句式;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
l’ m 13 years old 。l'm an English girl。l can speak English,but like Chinese every much.I want to find a Chinese pen friend.Because I want to know lots of chinese history .I hope we can be friend,then she can help me to study chinese and i can help she to study English. Do you want to be my pen friend?