正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文中单词拼写做的很棒,再多积累些词汇就更好了;不能熟练使用过渡词,基本没有衔接词。
Sam got up at 6 o'clock yesterday. Then, Sam took bike to park. He was very happy. Sam and his parents had lunch in Mcdonald. In the afternoon, his classmate and he were playing basketball at school. They were playing it at 4 pm till 6pm. After dinner, Sam and his father were going for a walk. And his father bought a piece of classical music CD to him. What day was very interesting to Sam.