2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Dear Jo: It is my pleasure to hear that you will visit my home town Ziixing next monday. For your well preparing the travel, I would like you introduce the most interesting point Dongjiang river, a five A senic point, which is very popular in south for the clean water with densitly forest. there are many funny games and plays during the summer, especially, the dongjiang boat float