文中词汇表达灵活性要提高,希望能较熟练地使用高级词汇;可将文中的简单句转换为长句或者复杂句;衔接词汇很少,建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累。
Dear Mr Daniel: Thank you for your continued interest in our product. We could provide the sample, but according to our company’s policy, the customer have to pay the transport cost. Could you transfer the expense to the account opened in HuiFei bank: or email your DHL account, we will deliver the sample soon. I apologize for any inconvenience caused. Wish this policy would not influenced our relationship. Thank you for your understanding, look forward to our cooperation in the future. Your sincerely