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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71619
要求:
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;文章上下文衔接自然;简单句稍微有点多,可适当增加从句使用。

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