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Dear Ray: We treasure the relationship between our companies for these years. Unfortunately, there are some problems between our cooperation and I regretted about it. Your company’s procurement department changed the content of the order one time by one time after placed it, sometimes even sent back the goods, which cause mess and difficulty for our work. For eliminating the misunderstanding, I suggest we will double check content of your order after receive it. If it is necessary to be revised, we will flex the revised order to your company for check. Wish the proposal would shorten the delay, and make the cooperation happier.